Esther Sylvester

Thanks guys! That means a lot. It makes me happy that someone took the time to read this. I'll look into the errors.

Hello there! This was interesting and well written. Your grammar is very good. I kind of had a sense of what was going on even though I didn't read the ...

What a cool idea, Nate! Well, I'll try my best. I thought I had a chance of getting the YWS Literary Journal, until I looked at the number of reviews ...

This was really good! At first I wasn't sure about the second person use but I think it really helped to engross the reader in the story. I think the ...

Hey! This was very well written and descriptive. The only issue I have here is that there isn't a point to it. Why is he here, alone in this desolate ...

Hello! This is quite good, but rough. You seem to skip about a bit, and your comma use is a little iffy. I liked this though because it was very ...

Hi! This was really nice. You have a good talent for descriptions. This isn't too long or long winded, which is good. What I think this piece needs is more ...

Hi! So this is a part of a random comic series. I remember a show called the "Grim Adventures of Billy and Mandy", where they died a lot but still ...

Hey! I remember reading this earlier back. I remember I liked it a lot. Since this is short the review will be short. Rejoice! Okay, I like this. My only ...

Hi! This was cute until the ending line, which didn't make sense. Did that little girl just kill her family? Clarify? Other than that, this kept my interest. It was ...

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You have a very symbolic point of view. Have you ever tried poetry? I bet you would be good at it. You're welcome.

Hi there! First off, the title cracked me up a little because I thought you literally meant you were writing an imaginary prologue. In the title, put a ":" in ...

Yup, that's Inuyasha! Looking at this, I am immediately drawn to the eyes. They are very nice. Something about them feels slightly crooked though. I wonder why his is looking ...

Hi! This was well written, but really random. I know it is based off a dream, but that doesn't mean you should write it exactly as one. No dream makes ...